She cried for the first time once she arrived into the world
I can only imagine cause I was away in College during the birth of "MY LITTLE GIRL."
I'm a God Father now, yet I only wish I could've been there to see when you first came
I love the thought of you, and the perfect chain of words that make up your name.
Your dad is none other than me, even if our blood types don't match perfectly
But still all in all, had I been there to save your mother you never would've existed see?
Even though what happened was uncalled for, you are not a mistake
You are a gift that had been dilvered on that fateful day.
You happened like a healthy rose growing in tainted soil
And because of that you can blame me if you grow up being spoiled
As your God Father, I vow to put your life before mine
because I can't bear to see your mother cry if you left before our time.
Baby, baby, dear precious baby
I vow to help raise you to become that wise young lady.
Your mother and I, her family and mine
will raise you be better than he (your real dad) who (in a worldly way) made you.
Your mother and I, her family and mine
will do the best we can to raise you in a way that when you DO leave you will live in the midst of Angels.
You are my God child, my God daughter, my little girl
If you're blessed to look like your mother, you'll be the prettiest little girl in the world.
But I vow to help raise you, to be confident, and not conceited
to have boundaries of humility, with guidance how not to exceed it.
To be smart in everyway possible, so when altercations arise, only your words will be needed
To respect yourself and others, and to be smart enough to know how YOU deserve to be treated
I vow to never lay the weight of my hand upon you in malice
Cause you're my little princess and my heart is your palace.
I may not be the greatest God father in the world, but I can promise that I'll try
These are my vows to you and my dear Neveah Sari.
Please tell me what you think
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WOW this is beyond beautiful,
so touching and sweet.
I think your little princess will love this.
You should frame this for her and hang it on her wall.
Lovely job...
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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wonderful
"my heart is your palace" = great image
great write and I am sure you ARE the greatest father
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Beautifully written and nice flow...sweet.
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Thank you, I always wanted a daughter, and having a God daughter is like practice, cause bein the fact that she ain't mine for REAL for real, I can always give her back lol.
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wow
that was a beautiful poem. whoever your writing about is lucky to have you im her life. Great job -
Beautiful
Such heart and such love for through the childs eyes either he will see love or he will ask why for God does see through the childs eyes for the ones who comes to love him or her
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This is a special poem for a young lady that is fortunate to have you in her life. Any man can have a child but not every man is fit to be a father. This may not be your biological daughter but she is YOUR daughter. Well written.
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This is a very pretty poem, I enjoyed it very much and I cna relate to it because i never met my real father, he got my mum pregant at 14 and left. If I had had someone write me a piece like this I would have been thrilled, she will love this when she grows older. I thank you for hsaring it with us =)
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very very gud
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I have a goddaughter named Nevaeh Madison.
This was very sweet. I can totally relate to it!
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This is so sweet and beatiful to read. I can see you put your whole heart into this poem. The vows you make here are what parents and godparents really should do for their children. It like you're going to try to be a great godfather. That girl really lucky to be your goddaugther.
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Great poem..its really good. I was hooked onto reading it. A GOD FATHER WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lucky....you probably are the best one anyway...anyway good write.....u are a wonderful poet.
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awww a God father???? that is so cute!!! congrats! and i hope your god-daughter love this poem because i do. this is well written and you just blew me away. i put 2 new poems up so check those out when you get a chance. and i change my page so read that as well. thanks a million!!! return the favor.
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This is really great......I wish you luck on being a god father and congrats!
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excellent
wow this is so beautiful, I'm sure your gonna be a great God father! she is very blessed to have you. Thanks for sharing, and for the comments you left about my black planet page.
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This was really beautiful!....I can't think of anything else to say....just beautiful! Keep Writing babe!
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