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A return trip ? hehe

I just read an article
That made me really laugh
It wasn’t all that farcical
And it wasn’t all that daft

You see, I am a pilot
And I grace the skies all day
But what I saw one sunny day
Will never fade away

A couple in the distance
Not a shred of cloth to see
I had to take a closer look
Get as low as I could be

And there just right below me
Was the sight I thought I’d seen?
A couple in the throws of love
Not an inch there was between

Now they saw me looking down at them
And jumped with such a fright
You should have seen the redness
Jeez, talk about real bright



So I waved and shouted down to them
Said ‘hello’ wearing a smile
And turned the rudder one more time
Cause I really liked their style

Just as god had made them
As natural as could be
So I took another fly by
Oh, all right then, I did three

But the sight of me just being there
Made them run and hide away
But the vision in my memory
Will never fade away.

Author notes

Eilene, I just had too, couldn't resist it ....*wink*

 

http://allpoetry.com/poem/3374786  the inspiration.

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  • sheltered
    August 23
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    Lol... "Farcicle" alone is enough to make me tear
    and "daft" my god that makes me laugh.
    Nice rhyme...
    I like the part where you take a second pass... lol
    Such style, such flair
    I barely breathe the air
    and laughter as the third time after you take
    smitten. Come on kitten. You were there.
    Purrrrrr capita.

  • garde a l eau
    July 10

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    whoops! I read her tale of blushing cheeks, too. This is such a great response.

    ...love the red wings, too. I always think it would be such a rush to fly. ~K

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 15
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    only you mikey


  • Riftkin gold member
    June 15

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    This does work with her poem
    and I must admit, I think it was funny
    and well written too

    Riftkin


  • AnnD Moderators member
    January 29

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    ROFLMAO oh Mike did you REALLY do this…… you bad bad man. Lolol
    It reminds me of a more recent story where the lifeboat was called out to a supposedly stricken boat and the occupants were prone in the bottom of it. But when the lifeboat arrived, they discovered a very similar situation. They eventually towed the boat and very red faced occupants back to shore.

    Ann

  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    September 24, 2007

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    i would like to thank you for entering this silly little poem for my humor contest. i wish you well in the contest and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 23, 2007
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    oh la la

    Will you be my sky pilot?!!?


  • azlyn gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    That was so wonderful! I can just imagine that scene from both perspectives! Thanks for the giggles!
    Love~
    Az

  • nothinghere silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    That is hilarious, I needed a good laugh, could just imagine this low flyer spying away... lol

    Well done on a great one

    Karen


  • Providence
    September 5, 2007

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    Delightful...I have been in one of those little red planes, didn't see anything quite so humorous. Was too busy just holding on!

    WOnderful right, Marc.

    Bet they still smile about that day too!

    Marianne


  • thepoetssoul gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    This is freaking hilarious LMAO
    I am impressed with your rhyme and flow
    This made my day A splendid poem indeed.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    Damn,

    Now this is some funny stuff right here brother, damn, LMFAO~ This is what I call a comment! I know Eilene enjoyed it, for she shared this with me.. and I read the piece that this was inspired from. LOL.. Thanks for busting my gut! Peace brother, Timothy~


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 5, 2007

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    thanks for sharing this and bringing some sunshine into my otherwise screwed up day my brother. this is so cute and ohhhhhhhhhhhhh how they must have felt being swooped down on and watch

    be well and be blessed

  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    Well penned This poem flowed perfectly, and your rhyme, as usual, is right on the mark Well done


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 5, 2007

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    aww sweetheart xxxxx i couldn't help but laugh as I was reading your comment -- aww my Dear loving Scottish Knight I am surprised you didn't come and land the plane as it would had been well worth making your passionate aquaintance xxxxx love ya always and more you will always be the pilot of my heart. i love you always, xoxoxox


  • MoonsShadow gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    very funny ...gives food for thought,as to go in public display lol..nice images of simple people, thanks for sharing, lmao...SH


  • TwilightPanther gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    This is just the sweetest...Standing there just as God intended...OH! MY! caught in the act...Thank you so much for the laugh...you are the greatest!!!


  • Tattboyspet
    September 5, 2007

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    - that must've been a wonderful sight! pity u couldn't take pics
    lol - not quite sure which position I would've preferred though ... voyeurism and exhibitionism BOTH appeal to me
    well done on a really sweet write about something that could make most people really embarrassed

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