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Taken

From the day you were born to me,
You were mines to hold.
You gave me the look of and Angel.
That told me God sent me something special.
As you grew life was so precious,
until that faithful day when you were,
Taken.
I looked high and low for you,
never giving up hope that i would
find you one day.
At night with voices in my head
telling me i would find you.
The lord telling me to never give up.
So when i say these words
Hope, love, and heart will lead my way,
To what i love the most, that which was,
Taken will now find her way home.
God be with you and i hope and pray that
you find her and NEVER GIVE UP HOPE
SHE WILL RETURN SOON.
GOD BLESS YOU.

Author notes

TO THE LITTLE GIRL I HOPE THAT THEY FIND HER. AND I HOPE THEY NEVER STOP GIVING UP  ON HOPE

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  • xxvampyregirlxx
    December 1
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    this is really filled with emotion and its really sad at the same time and i hope they find her too. this is really amazing. thank you so much for the entry


    • MzDimeDivia
      December 1
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      thank you it took alot emotion because i had someone close to me to die


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 6, 2007
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    This is a write filled with emotion and lots of love and hope, you have penned some precious lines...there are the odd spellings that needs correcting but I am not looking at that in this contest...

    The ending of your poem comes across quite powerful, I will remember your lines long after reading...thank you for your caring support...

    ~Lilac~