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Sweet sweet violin

Sweet sweet violin,
It's just you and me again.
Playing sweet music for those
Who are open to hear it.
Breaking the hearts
Of those who are already broken.
And as the clouds roll in,
And I'm starting to fall,
yes, from on high,
It's just you and me again.
We've broken our hearts
Breaking others.
We've lifted ourselves up again,
bringing others with us.
But it's just you and me again.
You and me,
my sweet sweet violin.

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probably not what you're looking for, but I enjoyed writing it. so thanks for the opurtunity!

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  • Fallnangel7
    October 22, 2007

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    beautiful job stormy
    violins are realy sweet intruments,lol
    i love the formn of figurtive language you used in to
    great job, all of your poetry is such fun to read
    ttyl


  • flaed
    September 5, 2007
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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    Actually, that was quite beautiful. I loved it. I used to play violin...haven't in a while now. This was beautiful. I loved how you made it into almost a metaphor. Beautiful.
    Write on.~*~SP~*~