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Drink to drink...

The first leaves begin to fall,
On my involving body
Of thousand colors, wind makes choices.

Felt the dew....wetting my absorbent soul,
Sit down in brilliant lap
Wrapped up, in meshes!

Drinking in harmony, droplets of a gentle liqueur,
drink to drink to joy

Looking again, witty of golden ... golden silver,
Always so elegant, so beautiful !

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prompt: Autumn Dew

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  • Namita
    September 5, 2007

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    This poem too is very elegant and beautiful. Simple yet very sweet and short. Thanxx much for entering and all the best of luck in my contest.

    Luv,
    Candy