rain drops on green leaves
sound of water makes music
aroma brings sleep
Author notes
Image No.-23
A contest entry
- The Avatar Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Unfortunately, AP isn't allowing me to post a copy of the avatar-image along with my comments, so I'll try to re-hash what I had left you in my original post here without the image.

There is a sense of peace and serenity you have drawn in this haiku and it feels to really hear the rain. It really is such a pretty picture to this avatar-image, and thank you so much for this entry to the contest.
Jo
P.S.: If AP allows me to post the avatar-image to you in comments later on, I will.


