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Melt in love

a blossoming rose
an offering to sweet heart
make them melt in love

A contest entry

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  • Melodies
    October 4, 2007
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    Love this haiku!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    Great write, I know little about Haiku but I love the words you picked. Good luck in the contest.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    Great write, I know little about Haiku but I love the words you picked. Good luck in the contest.


  • NoWayJo
    September 7, 2007

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    Very pretty interpretation of the avatar-image, Sandip. While the rose blooms, the lovers are melting in love--Very nice contrast.

    Thank you so much for this entry to the contest!

    Jo