a shadow ripples
reflecting beads of moonlight
to sudden tremors
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Ha! I helped you make this background. It's nice to know that you still use it.
I followed your poem and thought you did a great job. You did this poem in steps, but beautiful graceful steps. The end is the best though.. Your poem is gentle until the last word.
Tremors.
An exeptional poem. I liked it. -
I am definitely NOT a haiku person but I am in LOVE with this.
Perfect.
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Pretty flower
Haiku! whoo hoo! lol
I don't think I have ever thought about a shadow having ripples before but now that I think about it..they do!
Beads of moonlight... I think drops of dew when I read this line...little droplets...
to sudden tremors...
I know this probably has nothing to do with the image at all but I was just thinking that this reminds me of some place cold..like... the chorus room in the basement of third building on campus here..lol..random thought but that line just totally threw me off onto something totally different...train of thought...why can't it be a bus of thought? or a plane of thought?
ohh! or better than that..a motorcycle of thought!...sorry..got off again..lol...
great image haiku poem thing...u know that already though..lol
Kay Laon Anders
(nkma)
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two shadows move
under the moonlight
sudden tremors
entwined shadows
ripple creek's water
under the moon
It's lovely, inspiration inspires
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this is fucking beautiful. absolutely breathtaking <3
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