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a difference in me

efil ni raf og ot detnaw I
rotcot a emoceb dna og
neve ebyam ro reywal
rosseforp a

erehwemos og ot detnaw I
dah eno on
tuo neve ebyam
yaw yklim eht fo

nohtaram a nur og ot detnaw I
reve tsegnol eht
og ot flesym dlot evah dluow
em deppots enoyna fi neve

srats eht hcaer dna og ot detnaw I
dnei ym rof
reh ot evorp ot tsuj
neppah od selcarim
ti rof og ew fi tsuj

dezilaer I neht dna
tuo gnippans retfa
noitanigami ym fo
dna og ot dah I fi
lla ta gnihtyna eveihca
htiw trats ot dah I
sgniht fo tsellams eht
flesym evorp ot
og dluow I erofeb

Author notes

option 10 (2,5 and 6)~

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  • Eternal-Jammy-Jam
    September 5, 2007
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    well done clap clap


  • Beauty Of Silence
    September 5, 2007

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    AH! I TOOK ALMOST A CENTURY READING THIS!!! I ALREADY TAKE LOADS OF TIME READING AND ANALYSING NORMAL POEM... WELL THIS MADE IT MUCH HARDER... BUT IN THE END I UNDERSTOOD IT OKAY!

    anyways, this poem was purely and entirely and fully TRUE!!! to be all those great things you've mentioned up there, you have to begin with the smallest of things first... Nobody became a doctor or a lawyer or a professor just like that BHAM! it all begins with the bloody exams!! And mentioning exams, ours is comind soon!!! SOON and i FEAR THE CONSEQUENCES! GOOD LUCK 4 ZE PREPARATIONS...

    WELL, ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS THAT THIS POEM WAS AMAZING.. (though it took me a century to read it) IT WAS AWESOME! COOL POEM AND GOOD LUCK 4 THE CONTEST!


  • anaisnais
    September 5, 2007
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    I'm so sorry I cannot read your poem I'm sure it would be great. Good Luck!


    • transit
      September 5, 2007
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      lol! ye it's hard to read but thanks for the encouragement!