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Sour Earth

It's not you
who does not see

We cannot all
be born free

And though we fight
we will not win

We lose it all
and all again

It's the same
it's always been

The dust, the blood
the soil, the sin

We lose it all
and all again

It's nothing new
we will not win.

Abigail Zambrana - 2007

Author notes

I wrote this in like five minutes to fit the song I'd written on the guitar. Not my best, but it'll do.

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  • McFairy
    September 5, 2007

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    I absolutely love it!!! So so true and beautifully written!! You are a super-star writer hun!!!


    • greenewhiplash
      September 5, 2007
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      Thank you darling!!! You're so good to me The lyrics alone aren't that great, but I don't mind them with the guitar (my first guitar song!). Miss you, though. How have you been?