Tiny drops spilled,thunder flirted. Lips spiralled against smooth, writhing body... sapping sweet sensations that dissolved like sweet candy. Hushed breath echoed desire, lifting pelvis.
Insatiable fingers caressed hard rhythms while bodies soared in silk, like ribbons seducing the wind. Deep, slow thrusts hummed until storm's rage dismounted into drizzle.
Author notes
Prompt: Passionately Saturated
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A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10 x 50 x 30 ~ Reserve Your Spot NOW! (18 and over ONLY) by Celticmoon.
550 points, ended September 5, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing !
Erotic sensuality capturing a moment of passions lust
felt through out the whole poem.
Julie
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amazing work her you should have won a trophy touching me deep within i loved reading this piece well done as usual
Deep, slow thrusts hummed until storm's rage dismounted into drizzle.
A lovely piece of the way your mind thinks thanks for sharing
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You my friend have painted a picture that sears the heart. Passions flames will be doused by these words and sweet slumber will prevail. Excellent! I wish you well in the challenge!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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'bodies soared in silk, like ribbons seducing the wind.' I love that line. The visials it creates within the mind are amazing. It's unique, pleasing and most certainly sensual. Wonderfully done! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Bel
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wow.....
Great take on the prompt....Tastefully sensual and romantically soft....
Beautiful
Lynda
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