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trebucher

hospitality
          in the form of meekness
  and reserve
      and silence
can only be described as a ploy
          a present situation
                                          a          desire
  for a          _prescribed_        outcome
and the expectation that somewhere along the line
  someone
    decided
      to set me


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  • suzume
    September 5, 2007

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    wow... i don't know where it happened... but your stuff lately is really... just... it seems so different from what you used to write. not better, not worse, but different. more... almost beat.
    i like it though.


    • nanashiamai
      September 5, 2007
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      hey thanks. ^_^ i guess i have been trying for a new style lately. of course i suppose thats because i thought my previous stuu was too uniform/predictable. but yeah...

      thanks. ^_^