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A Beautiful Illusion (And a Masquerade of Lies)

All I saw was just
a beautiful illusion,
just like you.

So many fanciful lies
I have convinced
myself to believe.

You lovely liar,
you breathtaking backstabber,
how could I ever have loved you?

You clouded my mind,
you twisted my thoughts,
you made me question myself.

Nothing but a hazy
masquerade, I cannot
see your face.

You were hiding
behind a mask
the entire time,
and never let me see
the real you.

I do not believe in you,
even though I used to.
You were always
a monster in disguise,
weren't you?

Tricking me,
deceiving me,
telling me lies.

My terrible angel,
why did you do this to me?
Your love was a lie all along.

Leave me now,
for I am turning my
back on you.

My magnificent nightmare,
my radiant deceiver,
now I am seeing clearly.

You were never anything

but a stunning mirage,
a dazzling vision,
a beautiful illusion.

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  • Jfd
    October 4, 2007

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    interesting write, you definitely allow the reader to dive right into the emotions you were trying to convey.....thanks for entering!


  • Naridill
    September 26, 2007

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    Very interesting, captivated alot and held its own ground. Nicely penned. And what an ending!

    Much luck

  • daydreamer09x
    September 7, 2007

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    Wow....i loved it, reminded me of SOMEONE..2 ppl actually...haha well i absolutely LOVE the CD u burnt for me..u are my HERO<333