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Perfume (oddquain)




Nose
tickled by
what cannot be seen
senses highly distracted
hooked


Author notes

Oddquain syllable count:
1, 3, 5, 7, 1

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  • Tirrell
    September 5, 2007

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    Ahh the smell, this leaves a mystery as to what is being smelled... lol I like this it gives perfect imagry! Good luck!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 4, 2007

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    I love this form, and yours is the first I've ever read written in it. The poem spins, and whirs a scent that is totally unforgettable. I love this! I wish you well in the challenge my friend. I must give this form a try.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 4, 2007
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    well done xxx