Some people say my name suits me
Caught in the act, setting the scene aflame
Feeling your fingers smouldering over my hot body
Emblazon my soul
Dip into my flesh
Set me on fire
Set me alight
With wet kissing and watch the steam rise
From molten flesh
Let me sigh, into your ear
So I can see
The hairs on the nape of your neck
Rise and stretch, with yearning desire
Move slowly amongst the flames
Make me dance
Make me sing
Make me
Make
M
E
S
I
G
H
In ecstasy as you reach soft succulent flesh
Seared and tingling with heady anticipation
Of your hands
Reaching inside
Emblazon your name on my nakedness
Touch me
Taste me
And in that moment, when I tremble and writhe
In your hands
See the fire burning in my eyes
And you will know my name
Some people have said, it suits me
Author notes
Well, you know, how this happened *wink* to make JD smile and laugh :P
Written September 21st, 2003
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so when can I expect my guy in a package? lol...
do I have to pay extra for shipping?
there is a wickedness to this... like a bad boy
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Sensuality in forms of plenty, is sometimes better than other courses partaken. I like sensuality, one may not think so, but, I do, there is a homage to it, there is an eye that guides through into voids that have never been journeyed or trekked.
It is a lovely companion, sensuality.
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heeeeyyyyy Gal it has been a while.....what a sexy poemmmm i loved it...you reminded me of my (On Fire)...thanks....(what got on to you, poetry friend?)..:-))))))))))))))
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Hot, Steamy, Sizzling, and Breathless
Damn girlfriend
It's late here just heading to bed
And I get to sleep with my daschaund tonight
No fair sis Gill
Will have to read a hmmmmph serene one now after this lusty one he
You go sis
Loved it
Luv you too sweetie
Susan~~~
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Thanks Jude and Jen..
sizzle hehehheehhhheee
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I want a bigger PHOTO dammit.
wonder what gage his hose is??
ahem
dammit......wheres the nearest 18 year old. meh......
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For me, eh? Hmm...me likes. Makes me want to do something bad now. I have to stop this, all of this lusty thinking, before I do something naughty to an unsuspecting cucumber.
Edited on Sep 22, 2:36 because 'The carrot was jealous'. -
Wow...great erotic write here. Especially loved:
"The hairs on the nape of your neck
Rise and stretch, with yearning desire"
Such a great visual. Loaded with desire and unrestrained need.
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good erotic poetry really makes you feel the moment, you have done that and you have also but a little of your own flavor in there. This is good and I would encourage you to write further on the subject.
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Gill
Oh my, girlie
, WOW, some hot stuff here 
I wish the picture was bigger too, I had to squint,also
Sizzling write sweetie!!!!!!!!!!!
Karen
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wooh...there was no x-rated warning! actually just after reading the title, and before reading the first line, I thought of your name (Crazy Fire /NurseChilly)and then what do you go and say in the first line? "Some people say my name suits me"...but I know you don't mean NurseChilly, it's that un-nameable, mysterious thing you are trying to describe. "And you will know my name." I would rather not name it, but it is whatever causes the crazy fire, desire, whatever, and it's just there "caught in the act, setting the scene aflame"...yeah, better experienced than named. (oh blush, I think I did my first critique on erotica hehe)
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whew, the page is steaming and sizzling. great one
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Whoooooooshers Gal! You make me blush ... see: blush
You are such an incredible writer ... When I was small, ero-tic-a was a whispered word ...
Keep well, Poetess.
Myra
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Sexy
Sexy, sexy girl, and the picture makes want to squint to see. VaVaVoom! This is great. Hot and flossy. You have done a great job here. I have to go and sit on my husbands lap now. Thanks whewwwwwwwww!!!
Peace
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Wow! This was pretty hot A great, sexy write I've seen your name around the featured list but never really took the time to read - glad I did this time, and will definitely be following you in the future to see what else you can come up with
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Now that last bit made me laugh.. ROFL!!!! I know I'm older than you, you cheeky git.. LOLOLOLOLOL
Thanks for the comment hun
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Well, if this is what happens to your imagination when you have a day of peace and quiet...!... just joshing, this didn't make me laugh or squirm so I judge it to be good 'erotica'....
"And you will know my name
Some people have said, it suits me".... What, Rumplestiltskin...?
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