T'was a bright and sunny day,
a picnic date out at the lake
shelter #3, the best choice
quiet and secluded from the road
away from Park Ranger's eyes
Emotions take over our hearts;
passion driven for unity,
kissing, undressing each other...
While consummating our love
with electrifying desires,
A voice is heard; but from where?
Blushing discovery from above;
a pilot yelling "HELLO!!" {waving, too}
from an open pit bi-plane.
Flying quite purposely; slow and low,
seeing his smiles from ear to ear.
All we could do was wave back {waves}
Embarrassed and shocked; disbelief
grabbing our clothes, dressing quickly
laughing hysterically by the situation
Eighteen years later and counting,
I still laugh when seeing a bi-plane.
Author notes
PROMPT:
Write a poem about a sexual mishap, a date gone wrong or a drunken mistake!
A contest entry
- Make Me Laugh ( Adult 18+ ) by Jfd.
300 points, ended September 9, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wa-uh-oh! Not only do the walls have ears, the skies have eyes! heheh!
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Made me chuckle.
Thanks for sharing.
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this is just too cute
I love it so much
now that is an embarassment
but oh so funny too
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Wow,
I bet this was a trip for sure! LOL!
You're so funny, and thanks for making me smile.
Much love to you, and all the best in the contest!
Timothy, poeticweaver~ xo
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lol this happens to a lotta young people that could not afford a room..lol but when you are out to have fun, who woulda thunk..lmao, thanks for a laugh ,some years later ,...good luck..SH
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This is just the cutest!!!...Mike is really in that plain
You have penned just the right emotions and pictures for us all to feel your plight Wonderful and thank you for the smiles
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lmao! Mike sent me this link to have a look at it from YOUR side and I think it's hilarious
well written - enjoyed this THOROUGHLY!!!!
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Well that was just "plane" rude of him to interupt. LOL
Misadventures that bring about fond memories are great to behold. Nicely done amd best to you in the contest.
Mouser
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I love planes too!
What a wonderful memory - and you'll always remember that summer!
Thanks for a wonderful adventure!
Tang
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This is a very cute and funny poem.
Love the imagery and flow.I love the wording.
The free flow was splendid
Best of luck to you
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very creative...thanks for the entry (and the laugh) !
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