I can never explain my emotions to well
so I sit and write it in ink.
I have so much I have wanted to tell
but now I think I'll write it instead.
I want to tell you I love you
and have for some time now.
I tried to hate you and forget about you
and sometimes even tried to be mad at you.
The fact is though that I could never hate you.
I used to think that you didn't care
and only wanted me when you wanted your share.
Some people may say I have missed my chance with you
and although that may be true
you'll always be in my heart.
This may sound corny but it's what I feel inside.
I'm tired of always keeping it all bottled in
and tired of having to hide.
As long as your around I'll be fine.
Just talking to you makes me warm inside
and when I'm down you make me laugh.
Not one of those fake laughs
but something that makes my day.
You may not know me that well
but this I know is true,
I have loved you since we were young
and day by day that love grows stronger.
Other girls may say they love you
but just remember this...
where were they when you were growing up?
and did they love you then?
fourteen years of loving somebody is a long time.
And no matter what happens I will always love you.
Every heart beat I have is because of you,
every breath I take is for you,
and every time you see me smile,you'll know it's because of you!!!
Author notes
* i would be happy if this happend
OPTION 5
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option 3 for contest"i fell in love"
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So similar to one that I wrote about 6 months ago to steven when I couldn't say it to him because I know he didn't feel comfortable with love and emotions, so I wrote it as if I was talking to him. One day you might be able to tell them how you truly feel? I hope so. It may be the same way too.
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this was such a sweet, sweet poem! it was so cute to read. i enjoyed it
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This is exactly how I feel about someone right now. It really made me happy to know that I’m not the only one who feels it. It has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it. Amazing word choice. My favorite parts are:
“I want to tell you I love you
and have for some time now.
I tried to hate you and forget about you
and sometimes even tried to be mad at you.”
And:
“Just talking to you makes me warm inside
and when I'm down you make me laugh.
Not one of those fake laughs
but something that makes my day.”
It’s so very sweet. And I hope that the person mentioned in this poem realizes how you feel about them and feels the same way back, because even though I don’t know you, I know that everyone deserves a chance at love. Absolutely one of my favorites in the competition.
Thank you and good luck in my contest.
-Dana.
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This piece just made me say "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" ~ who hasn't had that one special person who you really liked a lot ~ for whatever reason you turn away but somehow keep coming back ~ knowing thats the one for you.
So many times I've wanted to tell my friend~ but, at the last minute changed my mind... Weird how life can take you sometimes ~
Nice write ~ I did enjoy it ~ Thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" Contest ~ good luck to you! -
loved this piece. Full of emtion and a good storyline. WWW*
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It is a very touching write, very heartfelt.
I didn't feel a comfortable flow to it, but that could just be me
Can I ask you to please message or pop into your author notes your AP family choice, if you are to be a winner
Thanks for entering it into my contest and good luck with the other ones you have it in
Cindy
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Oh what a great entry in the contest
you have don a splendid job
Best of luck to you in all your contests
delila
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Congratulationg to you on the three honorable mention trophies. This was a very uplifting poem. I loved it. It is sometimes so hard to tell that special someone that you love exactly how you feel due to the fear of them being chased a way by the feelings you have that are so dear. This poem has a very loving message to it. I absolutely love it. Good luck to you and this poem in this contest. Keep up the excellent work.
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Congrats on the three honorable mention trophies. This was quite emotional and heartfelt. I for one truly enjoyed it. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Awwww that was beautiful. I am a sucker for lover poems. That one touched me. I was afraid to say I love you to my gf but once I did it felt like a thousand pounds lifted off my chest. Thank you for entering and good luck to you.
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This is a very heartfelt poem. I really enjoyed it. Honest and emotional good job. Good luck in the contest.
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Great Write I wish you the best of luck in the contest congratulation on the previously won honorable mention trophies
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this is good... good luck in my contest!
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I like this poem, it does go along with the guidlines and it is very emotional. I feel most of the pain in this poem, I wish you good luck in the contest. Thank you
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Very lovely and sad. Full of love felt and lost, emotional and moving.
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Good luck! Beautiful poem!!! Maybe it will happen :-)
Leslie -
nice poem! good luck!!!
leslie -
"though I can never explain my emotions to well" - "to" at the end would be "too".
"but somethign that makes my day." - "somethign" would be "something".
I felt that the overall poem could use a more structured form, perhaps syllable count, or something. To make it a more fluid read.
Other than that: a nice poem that you have written here.
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great..NAME IN AUTHOR BOX.
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this is wonderful, great flow and some lovely wording, very romantic! thoroughly enjoyed reading this one, well done and thanks for entering
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Wonderfull poem!
Shows real emotions
I especially like this part
''This may sound corny but it's what i feel inside.
I'm tired of always keeping it all bottled in
and tired of having to hide.
As long as your around I'll be fine''
Great job
Good luck in my contest
Jaz <3 -
this is great
i could really feel your love and the pain
you know it hurts that you love them, but you don't want to stop, or you can't
thanks for entering and good luck
xxxx
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Sorry, but we wanted letters, not poems. Nice try though.
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Other girls may say they love you
but just remember this...
where were they when you were growing up?
and did they love you then?
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I liked that the best. I liked this.nice.
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Wonderful thoughts, throughout! You have a real way with words, dear poet! Yes, fourteen years of loving counts!
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This is a really good poem. I think my favorite lines would have to be: I'm tired of always keeping it all bottled in and tired of having to hide.As long as your around I'll be fine.
Good luck in the contest!
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Looks like you have an immense amount of love here! Congratulations on finding the one for you.
Thanks for your entry. Love and luck in all you endeavor!
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if you can write it in a poetic form...i will be happy...but it don't flow well when it's in a paragraph...please fix...and then i will judge...thank you
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well said. success in the contest.
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very expressive piece here i think you did a very excellent job in this piece here i see you have it in a lot of provided contest good luck on my contest
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thank-you for sharing
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Aww! This is filled with passion && love. It almost makes me want to cry because its so touching. Great job! Good luck in the contest!!
Jackie ♥ -
An interesting read. I've been in a similar situation before. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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you really need to change the font color because I couldn't read this
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Thank you for entering. There is much love expressed here in your words. I applaud you for trying something new.
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Hmmm.. It's very nice poem and a great write. there is something about it that I can't put my finger on. If I figure it out I will comment again. Thank you for entering.
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