Golden centriole,
though unfragrant your blossoms;
alluringly swaying.
Author notes
Haiku
5-7-5
A contest entry
- Poet's Challenge Quickie by sunflowerpoet.
300 points, ended September 8, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tanka or Haiku Contest by HopelessScribbles.
675 points, ended November 13, 2007, 18 entries
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Golden centriole,
though unfragrant your blossoms;
alluringly swaying.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. You have described a very beautiful scene in this write. -
this is a very bright Haiku, thank you for the entry and good luck...MM

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Very talented. I loved this one. Thanks for entering and Good Luck!
Hugz,
Sunflower. -
Nice
Like all good haiku, it said a lot in a little.



