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Cosmos

Golden centriole,
though unfragrant your blossoms;
alluringly swaying.

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  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    Golden centriole,
    though unfragrant your blossoms;
    alluringly swaying.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. You have described a very beautiful scene in this write.


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    November 11, 2007
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    this is a very bright Haiku, thank you for the entry and good luck...MM


  • sunflowerpoet
    September 8, 2007
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    Very talented. I loved this one. Thanks for entering and Good Luck!
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.

  • celadia
    September 4, 2007
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    Nice

    Like all good haiku, it said a lot in a little.