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You leave me standing

 

 

You leave me standing on shattered dreams of days to come
My will yielding as scattered hope to wind succumb
Tears break as pale horizons give rise to dead moons
A chill shielding my broken heart from comfort mistuned
This melancholy kills me, fills me with covert dread, I fear
this shroud of sadness will never clear, I fear
the days to come will be in vein, they will enchain me
as darkness claims me, this is all my life will ever be.

 

 

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  • A1der4ya
    October 16, 2007
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    I really love the internal and end-line rhymes written here. The poem is sad, almost heartbreaking but beautiful just the same. Is is hurtful to know that poets write so well when dealing with issues of loss and pain. Very beautiful.


    Candice


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 8, 2007
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    loved it. its beautiful. hi! I hope you are ok though, very good writing.