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End of the Night

You walked me home at the end of the night,
No streetlamps, the moon our only light.
You walked me up onto my porch,
swaying on your feet, back and forth.

I looked at the ground and mumbled 'good bye',
I decided to chance it and look you in the eyes.
Eyes closed, you leaned towards me.
I took a deep breath, I thought I was ready.

Colliding together, my lips met yours,
We were tongue wrestling when my mom opened the door.
I squealed and jumped away – at least I tried,
You tried to pull away, I was ready to die.

We were both blushing madly,
My mom sure wasn't happy.
Driving to the orthodontist in the back seat,
Bound together by the braces on our teeth.

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Option 9: STUCK KISS

Well obviously.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 17, 2007

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    LMAOOOO this indeed was too damn cute.
    Well i do hope there was no permanent damage getting you both unclenched.
    Best of luck to you
    Tory

  • lost in neverland1
    September 15, 2007

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    lol HAHAHA this is soo funny! i love it!!! and i totally agree with Chrysalis its hilarious AND t rhymes!! lol lol


  • Chrysalis
    September 12, 2007
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    Not only is it hilarious, a top that it is also… RHYMING?! I mean really, wow! I think it could happen… though what a situation! (I wouldn’t want to be in.) *grins… at the thought of a stuck kiss… -Blanche

  • Chrysalis
    September 12, 2007

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    Not only is it hilarious, a top that it is also… RHYMING?! I mean really, wow! I think it could happen… though what a situation! (I wouldn’t want to be in.)
    *grins… at the thought of a stuck kiss…

    -Blanche


  • LovelyDesire
    September 5, 2007
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    omg...this is so funny...but can this really happen!?


  • xxxPoeticWhisperxxx
    September 5, 2007
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    teehee

    the last part was very funny!!! lol... I love the poem I really do good luck in the contest!!


  • So Strange
    September 4, 2007

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    This was a very funny write. But then again, what I had in mind for that option was for the poems to be funny, too, even though I already had a funny option. I enjoyed this, as well, because the flow was very nice and the write was like something I would think up... and that's a good thing.

    Favorite stanza was the last one because the really made me realize what the story was about.

    Good luck in my contest!

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