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Again

This mantra that they say to me
A chant that follows lyrically
into itself
again and again

I can't be with you
we're just friends

Clapping my hands in time with your words
choking myself
because again it occurs
The same thing, don't pretend

You can't be with me
"we're just friends"

Sing songy voice
even sometimes
a cackling whisper
I softly cry
holding on to my every limb

We can't be
we're only friends

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  • Danna Hobart
    September 18, 2007

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    Good job. Yes, this definitely speaks "broken record" to me. You captured the spirit of the contest. Thanks for entering.