Taking a walk
Riding a bike
Eating healthy
All the things we do to lose weight
I am one who didnt follow these ideas
now i am doing my best to change that
I want to live longer
i want to be stronger
life is to short to waste
so i am going to get up
and change my way of eating
and start excercising
A contest entry
- FOR FIVE TROPHIES OR LESS by Swan song.
450 points, ended September 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is honesty at its best great for you
and I agree life is short
so live it to the fullest
Riftkin -
Bravo for you! This is a very honest poem and I like
it when poets jst put it out there. There are a few typos but this is a great start.
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