I feel tangeled up
My feelings inside
I want to be free
But i want to hide
Am I falling for you
But unsure am I
I want to be with you
But i want to cry
In your arms i smile
But inside i'm dead
I want to be your lover
But the thoughts in my head
They're killing me softly
But as are you
I want your kiss again
But are you true
I hardly know you
But i know i'll be true
I want you to tell me
You'll love me too
Keep me in your arms
Please look me in the eyes
And tell me you love me
Without you i'll die...
Author notes
This is something to release these weird feelings i'm getting, i'm so confused, was i ever meant to fall in love, but without it i'm better off with a knive!
A contest entry
- Give me your best Prewrite by Starz of Heaven.
550 points, ended September 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance Poems, Please No Adults by Angel Eyed Baby.
600 points, ended December 11, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really liked this poem and good luck in my contest.
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This is a very nice write I can relate to it on loving someone so much and without them you would die thank you for your entry and goodluck in the contest.Best Wishes
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