Dancing on the ocean with my husband to be
as he glides tenderly down to me
my golden orb of deep universal desire
burning with love within my earthly heart
singing natures song time for day to sleep
raising my waves I gently pull him to me
come my love a nighttime awaits our embrace
let us together turn on the moon settle within the stars
I want to feel your heat deep within me
let us say goodnight and put day to sleep
my tender heart longs to hold you love you
Together we the earth and sun setting as one
Author notes
ive gone with trying to recreate the picture, so I cannot as of yet, put the picture on the page.
trying not to ryhme, gah was going crazy, I am still learning about all the different styles, so not sure if what I created fits your contests, but here's hoping.
A contest entry
- Paint a Sunset by Peteskid.
600 points, ended September 4, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is wonderful. Your words paint such a wonderful picture in my mind. The reader can feel the sensuality and the tender passion in the words. You have expressed yourself so eloquently in this verse. Well done.
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beautiful
Think this is my favorite of yours so far. I love the sensuality and passion you've captured. I especially love the last line, it really punctuates the poem... perfectly written!
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a wonderful narration here of a tender story of love and togetherness, creates a mood of passiona nd anticipation, very well done in an expressive style; thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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wow
I think this is beautiful !!
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Awww
I love this.Goodluck in the contest.
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