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Heartbeat Ver. 2

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Heartbeat
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Strength giving reason
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Slow vibrant rhythm
Heartbeat
Life's quiet singing
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Silent ignored being
Heartbeat
Supreme Indisgraceable
Heartbeat
Significant irreplaceable
Heartbeat,
Heartbeat-
Gently caressing
Heartbeat...Heartbeat
Overwhelmed with ecstasy
Heartbeat...Heartbeat
Racing fire of love
Heartbeat, Heartbeat-
Sincerely being rough
Heartbeat, Heartbeat-
Two souls become one
Heartbeat, Heartbeat-
Heartbeat-
Love's most playful fun
Heartbeat, Heartbeat-
Perfect harmonic bliss
Heartbeat... Heartbeat
Passionately tender kiss
Heartbeat
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Heartbeat
Comfortable embrace
Heartbeat
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A flawless grace
Heartbeat
Supreme indisgraceable
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Significant irreplaceable
Heartbeat-
Strength giving reason
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Slow vibrant rhythm
heartbeat
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Expanding evermore
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Let me feel your
Heartbeat
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Heartbeat

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  • lesbian-in-love
    July 31
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    Wow. That was good. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Hearta
    September 9, 2007

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    ooh... had to comment on vers. 2 very exciting.. love the triple heartbeat when 2 souls become 1. gave me a slight adrenaline rush...


  • HaleyMary
    September 4, 2007

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    This version seemed a little more hopeful and happy. Wonderful flow of emotion and good flow, as well. Keep writing.