I'm not crazy,
or insane,
but other than that,
its just a name.
but i dont think
thats me at all,
wait did you hear that?
there is someone in the hall.
there's not you say,
but i know he's there,
i just saw him
coming up those stairs.
You tell me that
there is no one here,
but to prove you wrong,
i heard him, my dear.
Now who's that,
banging on my door,
its medics in little white coates,
what are they here for?
someone's dead? today?
well, who killed him,
i hope they are put away.
I killed him you say...?
but thats impossible,
ive been talking to you,
but, they say you arn't real,
by the way, what is 302.
Author notes
i have really no idea on what caused to write that, it was kind of just spur of the moment what ever came out of my head, and i am very sorry, if its a little too weird. im a little confused myself.....
a little note to anyone who does not know what 302 means, its when someone you know or even cops/state involuntarly commits you into a hospital
A contest entry
- Insanity, Heed it's call by Swintha.
500 points, ended September 6, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inside the Mind of Madness by Synthetic-Nightmare.
1500 points, ended January 25, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was very incredible and completely creepy. You did an amzing job on conveying yourself as insane...Gave me chills. Well done....
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NICE......
haha, this was quite the fun read.
Well done, very chaotic and spoken as if you yourself are the actual killer. I like this one alot, thanks soooo much for entering. Best of luck to you and kudos
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This is spine tingling, chilling through and through. A very good piece, I love it. Well penned and good luck in the contest
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Wow, this is just amazing and really freaky. I love it. It made me want to look around and see if anyone was there. This is so wonderful and catching. Great job.
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OMG....this puts mine to shame.....you have done so incredibly well considering something you have no idea what caused it.....its amazing and i love it
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Very weird but I loved it. 302...so many thoughts. I feel we write in a similar style. There was rhyme, I love rhyme. I felt the insanity walking down the hall. Well done.
-Swintha -
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wow this is amazing..
4relz i love this poem sweetie it scared the shit out of when i got the part that was all like:
well, who killed him,
i hope they are put away.
I killed him you say...?
but thats impossible,
ive been talking to you,
oh my geezzz that was crazy i loved it you better win in that contest thats all i have to say this was to good..much love sweetie..xoxox
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