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Heartbeat
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Strength giving reason
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Slow vibrant rhythm
Heartbeat
Life's quiet singing
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Silent ignored being
Heartbeat
Supreme Indisgraceable
Heartbeat
Significant irreplaceable
Heartbeat
Shining like the sun
Heartbeat,
Heartbeat-
Two souls become one
Heartbeat,
Heartbeat-
Always waiting on what's next
Heartbeat - Heartbeat
And her words have me vexed
Heartbeat - Heartbeat
Her words have me vexed?
Heartbear-
Now she's become my ex
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Heartbreak
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Emotionless gaze
Heartbreak
Numbness for days
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Nerves paralyzed
heartbreak
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Soul in disguise
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Inescapable pain
Heartbreak
Eyes full of rain
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Thoughts come no more
Heartbreak-
Solitude with in this torture
Heartbreak-
Scar causing dreams
Heartbreak,
Heartbreak-
Awaking in Forever's sleep
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Stuffy noses
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Blackened roses
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful.. kinda goes along with my new poem i wrote last week. called "hearts beat" you might like it.. it's powerful and might lift you up. sounds like we're going thru similiar feelings

but this one - i def. like the whole heart beat and showing that it's dying (so to speak) just beautifully sad (anyway)... i feel u.

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Aw, this is so sad. the beginning seemed to start out hopeful and then towards the end it got sad. It's always hard when a feeling of love isn't reciprocated by another. This poem had a great flow and had powerful emotion. Keep writing.


