I didn't
make a wish
this year
on my birthday
flame.
But
the whole time
I thought
of you.
You didn't
call,
you didn't
write,
you didn't
even
stop by.
And I saw you
today,
tail wagging,
eyes sweet,
acting like
nothing
was wrong.
My birthday's
fire
in my eyes.
I stomp
on your
bull shit
excuses.
Ignore that.
Author notes
#4
A contest entry
- PIF Contest Now allowing PreWrites IF they go with the options by Amorous Arms.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well put
Men only remember what they want to HA HA!! And we are suppose to sit back and understand that they are just men. humm
Best wishes
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sweet
shows pain and everything. i dont understand one thing though. if this is about a boy... how do boys have tails? lol well wonderful write! i loved it. very nice and best of luck in my contest and thanks =]
~Ali
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Doll;;
I completely understand this.
boys suck
♥
~Princess of Shadows~
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