Black circles cradle
deep baby blue eyes
Bleach hair, bed-head
frantic expression
Lost and unknowing
Love spreads it's wings
Flies, as a broken butterfly
Porcelain skin, so cold
Will the pain cease?
Will he ever return?
Will she ever move on?
will the new one be more?
The mark he left was deep
She still tastes him
His scent lingers in the air
Their vows echo in her ear
I love you, forever
I die to your heart
I will never leave you...
...and where is he now?
Author notes
I choose the picture inspired option...#8
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A contest entry
- Options, heaps to choose from by ForgottenMemories.
650 points, ended September 17, 2007, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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deep
i really like this poem i always long for love its always hard when you lose it wondering if youll find it again
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Wow this was beautiful! You have definetally used my picture for inspiration, and it turned out fantastic!
I have to say my favourite lines would have to be
'Lost and unknowing
Love spreads it's wings
Flies, as a broken butterfly
Porcelain skin, so cold' That is beautiful! Well written.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
Sleep-N -
Its about me ......im not dumb
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This is really good .
Lost and unknowing
Love spreads it's wings
Flies, as a broken butterfly
Porcelain skin, so cold
Amazing goodluck in the contest.Best wishes
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