I look around,
im waiting.
For what?
For Familiar faces?
For Teachers?
I see my 'Friends'.
My teachers glare in my direction,
and i realise,
im waiting for lunch.
A contest entry
- 15 an under I NEED MORE ENTRIES!!! Please Look by krosebug.
525 points, ended September 9, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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i know how you feel, it's only second period for me now and i want lunch! lol! it's a good poem, but i think it could use a little more, you know, make it a little longer so the reader can really get into it.
thanks for entering!
--gooshawn<3
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good
This was good and thanks for entering. i guess we have a ll had those days that we just wish was over lready. thanks again for entering. -
This made me laugh! A great pen! Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck to you! Kaylea
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