prickly tingles
drip messages on skin
tickling,
like imagined kisses
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10 p x 10 w x 10 m by Riftkin.
300 points, ended September 4, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So simple yet
so profound...very well done.
*PEACE*
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oh wow... this is beautiful
and so delicately sensual... love these descriptions...
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Really nice take on the prompt, and clever word choice. It sounds great read aloud, the sounds in the words really suit the subject.
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A really touchy-feely write.
This is lovely.
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Very nicely done, I like...Scott
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Nice take... gentle and loving
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oh this is nice
love the way you
think of raindrops
as imagined kisses.
Riftkin -
Prompt Rainy days
Tell me how you feel
durning a nice rain storm.
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