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bullshit

feverish--
pounding
aching
existence.

--philosophy?
in the toilet
mixed with slimy bits of idyll

--faith?
coughed up, spat out
decaying in some fuck's front yard

but--

the light
of painful realization
only strikes
in
weakness
desperation
clinging to a piss-stained corner
naked, coughing up blood

the light
only comes as a sneer
from death
oh no--
you're not done yet, fucker
not by a long shot!

...and all you want to do is sleep.

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  • Sandygram
    September 5, 2007
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    Wonderful poem you have penned. Full of honesty. It is hard to forget all the crap of the day, when all you want to do is go to sleep. I know the feeling well. Great imagery!! You take care. Sandy


  • BriannaBrumfield
    September 5, 2007
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    Oh, Toad.