Fallen through tendrils of a frozen, silken dream,
like a nocturnal eclipse ment solely to enrapture
nimble frames and solid hearts,
awaken us once again.
"I'll re-awaken the fabrics of our beings,
with a heart made of leaden stone,
for I embody the ruin within.
I'll rupture rural hears and ruse it with dreams of fervent passion."
A blissful awakening will be found like morphine lips,
as they whisper silently to the silent air that lures us in,
of heartless tales that conquer zones within.
When we relaized that life was only a vividly dark dream,
nothing could change our minds.
She dances fervently, a gleam in her eye,
with the rain drops falling upon
the blood soaked earth, left desanctified by toil, ruin and misery.
"My nocturnal kiss holds up virgin dreams,
and kills them before they're touched or deflowered."
Clever little demoness clutching onto our falliable hearts.
breath your silken web around us,
for we cannot justify what we've wrought unto thee.
Clutch us to you and lull us into your midst.
A blissful awakening will befound,
like morphine lips on the jeweled crown,
as they whisper lusty tales to conquer zones within.
A contest entry
- .:.My Hero.:. Dark Writes... by Dead Hair.
525 points, ended September 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes by crystallynnbradford.
565 points, ended September 19, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite me! ~~ One day only ~~ 500 points to Gold, will be judged tomorrow. by Naridill.
625 points, ended September 28, 2007, 145 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love it, the imagery is captivating. A wonderfully woven poem.
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Beautiful piece, the setting out is a little akward but I feel you could edit it, to help the imagery spring out more.
Much luck
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i love it
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