He picks up the phone,
puts it down.
In her tears,
she would drown.
This fact he knows,
is oh so true.
The phone rings.
“What should I do?”
He knows it’s her,
he has to think!
Time is frozen,
he doesn’t blink.
He grabs the phone,
brings it to his ear.
From the other end:
“Hello my dear.”
He picks up the gun.
it’s time to die!
He screams in desperation:
“I’LL LOVE YOU FOREVER, GOODBYE!”
The love of his life begins to cry.
Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- Let me see your darkest side by sociaL IntollErance.
400 points, ended January 9, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - " Life From The Dark Side " by wingsofgold25.
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this ia realy a well written piece but so terrible sad such a waste of life. And so Heartbreaking.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest -
This is truly a dark poem and although I did enjoy it I wonder how one that loves someone so much would do something so cruel to them. A bit conflicting.
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Omg...
This poem is really fast paced... intense...
Keep it up
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This is such a tragic poem
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OMG 
NOOOOOooooo!!!!!...I can here her scream...
This is intense little brother.
holy moly. Great intensity.
delila
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flows nicely of the page, yeah and its pretty heartbreaking. Nicely done.
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fucking heart breaking =(
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