together at last.
we'll tryitagain see how this goes.
frolic? ogle? fondle? NO no no
explore the house the house the
climb through there-------------------------
no, there----------
this space is a little tight.
really tight. Getting a little (tighter)
getting maybe a little
too tight for the 2
of us to
fit
maybe a little too
tight forthe2
ofusto
fit
get
out
ple
as
e
.
GRAND
hty stair
here we are. a mig case with
plenty of roooooooooooooooom for the
2 of us.
DOWN
DOWn
DOwn
Down
down
down
---.
very steep. it seems we've lost our existence.
e
e
e
e
e
e
eep. it seems we've lost our existence.
Author notes
Folly of relationships
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty by Matt Holck.
525 points, ended September 5, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round 1: Hit me With your Best Pre-write. by edit my world..
425 points, ended October 20, 2007, 64 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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finalist btw..i forgot to tell that...
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hmm i like this! it confused me because of the umm little odd breaks lol.
but i still love this!
Interesting house too...i wanna house...well i have one but i hate it because my sister left for college and im upstairs by my self GAH i hear strange-- nvm! thankies for entering!
TheSpork Princess
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love the opening and constricting of the space
don't recognize hty or mig
the pinching of the stanzas is clever
I like the second openning method of the room
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