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Inside It's Ever Raining

On the inside it is ever raining
It's simply a dewy musk
Every dawn in the daylight
Beyond the time at the dimishing dusk

You've never left me
No matter what they say
I am going to get to you
No matter what they say
Because I want to fall in love with you
In every single way

I want to fall into your eyes
Like I would a deep revine
I am already past the surface
I see your unseen

I want to feel your heartbeat race
As I put it back in place
As you could touch my lingerie
In black and scarlet lace

I could embrace your skin
The outside as well as in
How I yearn for it, I couldn't begin
As to describe it, how it would feel, as we both win

Your lips, against mine
You have no idea how it would feel so Divine

You and me
So happy together









Heartache of long distance

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  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    November 5, 2007
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    aaaaawww this is soooo sweet! i loved it! amazing job!


  • Decorus Somnium
    September 14, 2007

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    Great job hun. I really wish these things too...believe me, a lot! But don't worry, life's in front of us. We will reach that
    Keep writing


  • Sam-Heartagram
    September 9, 2007
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    awwwww i rele like it
    its easy to relate to
    YAY!

  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    September 4, 2007
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    "I want to feel your heartbeat race
    As I put it back in place" Those two lines are perfect. In fact that stanza flows so wonderfully.

    Great write, a little too lovey dovey for me at the moment but I can understand and totally relate. I hope all goes well for you two

    Bandaid.