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Precious Gifts

Precious Gifts
As the forest drips with green emerald hues
In the sapphire sky; mounts
A more perfect jewel
Ablaze! A diamond sun grants
A timeless piece
To watch in each horizon
The birth
Of a new day
The birth of you
And me



Copyright ©2007 Ralph Pagan






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  • --Beautiful--
    September 5, 2007

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    Beautiful, I love the choice of the powerful words to describe something most people don't even think twice about. It is a stunning image. Lovely read, I am touched.


  • FunnelWaxFate
    September 5, 2007
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    Wow...incredible, splendid imagery, here. wonderful write, to say the least!


  • aArticfalcon
    September 4, 2007
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    Ablazed

    A timeles piece to amaze!!!