Wake wave, music's muse
signals wavelength acceptance
nevermore refuse
could spirit confuse
as from vocabulary
its concept two lose.
'Let us start slowly'
one says. 'Festina lente'?
one replies: wholly
WE seems spliced holy -
'solely' : another word dropped -
replaced by soully
Image upon a screen -
recognized as important
as anything has been
in life until now -
seeks nor 'how ? ', 'how long ? ' nor 'why'.
Entropy must bow
in recognition
revitalization completes
quest's request mission
in virtuous spin
nurturing relationship
everywhere win/win.'
Anticipated prize
no puzzle, no pieces - peace
surprise sheds disguise
as her[e] heartfelt cries
are heeded, - 'needed' kneeded
answers love supplies
for acceptance needs
no 'thank you', no 'pretty please'
Joy seeds through joy's seeds.
In a list
Courtesy welcome and extended [Reward: double points]
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From what I have seen of your poetry you seem to love talking in riddles and using the out of the ball park sayings. All in all when you aren't trying to lose us in the race you keep it easy to read and enjoyable.
I particularly liked how you used the play on words in this poem, made it fun to read.
Thanks for sharing this with us!
Keep it flowing
Amadahy -
Excellent
It's a good thing you didn't let this one turn into a tongue twister, however, you came pretty close. Otherwise very well written. -
ooohh o-0 fun!!
Loving this alot.
'Let us start slowly'
one says. 'Festina lente'?
one replies: wholly
=D Latin! That's some G-Shit right there. =D
Are you some type of professor or something? I am truly amazed. No wonder my mom keeps telling me to write write write before someone else writes it.
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Beautiful use of words, The lines
"for acceptance needs
no 'thank you', no 'pretty please'
Joy seeds through joy's seeds"
Were my favorite. Your words speak a truth that not many know in this time. Wonderful use of language. Its rare to find a poem that plays on the imagination with words. Congrats on an excellent poem!
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for acceptance needs
no 'thank you', no 'pretty please'
Joy seeds through joy's seeds.
The use of language is tricky and smart, and I like the way you play with words and meanings-in a most poetic way. The above was beautiful. (as was it all!)
I like poems that sound different when read out loud- that make you pause, and think. xx
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Multi-lingual, the waves acceptance whispers stir all hearts.
Marvelous write, Jonathan!
Marianne
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Acceptance is what one needs and fully to understand. Love is never a gambling thing, to be expressed yes! wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest ~Sie
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