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Music = Life (and then some)

Music the international language
the tongue of the heart
that speaks to me
though it's worlds apart
from reality and existence
but i'll listen past the silence
cuz the beat of the drums
match the beat of my heart
and the baseline
has walked with me from the start
throwing me into a trance
so i dance this tragic dance
lyrics of heartache and sorrow
some of hope for tommorrow
push me onward
though it might sound upsurd
for this ensemble of musical notes
are my vital signs
cuz when the music is brought to an end
so is my soul
for without the screams from the mic
i'm not whole
and with this bellowing chorus
comes air into my lungs
and with this verse
comes blood into my veins
for the music takes away the pain

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  • Firequeen
    March 4, 2008

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    you said it all very well.
    Music is a big part of my life to i can find a song for almost anything i'm feeling
    Really good write you have here.
    Fire

  • InTheSecret
    September 24, 2007
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    wow...i really like this...i love music, and this just sums it all up...really really good piece


  • sceneXcore
    September 4, 2007

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    amazing

    you must have played in my mind because you managed to write down my exact feelings/passio/love/ for music... ur aweseom buddy-o.
    It wuz good talking to you yesterday... soory I was a douch and didnt answer at first... I was texting and talking... guhhh it was crazy everyone loves alexis day yesterday... actually thats how my cell always is, and I have contimplated throwing it down the shitter from time to time... ha ha!

    Take care
    God Bless
    ALexis


  • livingItup
    September 4, 2007
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    wow...i really love this. its amazing
    love the rhymin i love..well everything! good luck ^^