Hesitating
I open the door
Am I what you are looking for?
Do I please you?
Am I what you desire?
Please tell me Master do I set your heart on fire?
Nodding you look me up and down
Dressed in basque, crotchless panties and high heels
Earl I'm telling you I am the real deal
Raising my leg you take the garter from my thigh
Inhaling the sweetness of my sex
Thrusting your fingers deep inside
Finger fucking me I catch my breath
My hips start to rise
As your tongue slides over my clit
Deep breaths I hear, a whispering groan
I start to remove the rest of my clothes
I reach for you to kiss your lips, SLAP!
'Don't do that' you insist
The sting on my ass makes my passions rise
I see a deep desire as I look into your eyes
I am your Whore, your birthday surprise
Now watch me tease and tantalise
Take me by my leash
Make me crawl
Lick your feet and your balls
Open your present Earl
I am here to please
Take me to my knees, make me
Suck and fuck you, til you
Lose control, take me like no other
Hear my breathless sighs, devour me
Fuck me til I'm sore
Use me Master I'm your whore
Leave me begging, wanting more
Bite my clit, make my fucking cunt spit
Caught up in the moment
I can no longer breath
Using me to meet your needs
Bodies hot, glistening with perspiration
Another thrust deep penetration
Ecstasy Earl is your next destination
Total exhilaration, juices meet
I am your birthday surprise, your whore my sweet
Author notes
Earl have a truly wonderful birthday
may all you are wishing for CUM your way
and never stop being NAUGHTY!
Love ~sugar~
A contest entry
- FOR WOMEN ONLY - MAKE ME HARD FOR MY BIRTHDAY! by Swtpoetryman.
600 points, ended September 4, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think it deserved a gold!
this was incredable !!!!!
I think i got turned on lol
gave me some ideas to say the least!
wonderfully written ..
every line flowed beautifully to the next...
no lines seemed forced and to top it off i could see the picture you painted as i read through each line.... you always make the reader want more!
I cant wait to read more of your work!
awesome!
(((hugzzzzz))))
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PUT THE ICING ON ME CAKE!
Thanks, Sugar - for making my Birthday a VERY HARD one, indeed - now that i ma home form work and the party has only just begun! As always - I had a lot of fub with this piece and i don't have to tell you how! As Wayne said below - I'm a lucky guy - to say the least - and never feat for i will never stop being naughty for i enjoy the spankings too much! He! He!
Here cum three horny and naughty fellows now who love a fine ass spanking nearly as much as me! He! He!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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SUPERB
STUNNING WRITING HERE. BRILLIANT PIECE OF EROTIC WRITING WITH AMAZING IMAGERY. EARL IS A LUCKY GUY. HAHAHAHAH
WELL DONE SUGAR, YOU HAVE DONE WELL WITH THIS.
WAYNE
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Wayne thank you so much for
reading and leaving a comment
Always appreciated
Love ~sugar~
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Wow Sis Earl is going to enjoy this piece, I really liked very much, It's super hot and awesome, You are so good at writing these great writes, Well enjoyed good luck in the contest sweety much love,
LISA
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My dear sis
Thank you for reading this
Always appreciate your comments
He just seems to bring out my naughty side LOL!!!
Love ~sugar~
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lmao...
WOW...Earl sure is getting all the attention these days, sis
Loved this layout, I can bet you 1million Dollas that he had a pleasurable expierence reading this piece from you....Hot and always steamy...Ahemm.....now who being a naughty gurl now
Loved It
Ephiphany
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Hey sis
He brings out my naughty side HE! HE!
He hasn't seen it yet.
It's his birthday today
Really appreciate you reading this
Love ~sugar~
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Absolutely Brilliant
You've sure done it with this one. Brilliant, one present Earl will certainly want to open on his birthday for sure.
All the best, although you wont need it....
Sue
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Thank you Sue for reading
As always I appreciate your comments
~sugar~
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wild! well earl is a lucky guy to get such words as this one i enjoyed the buil up tension in your piece to your lover
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Thank you for reading
~sugar~
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