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I Watch

I watch.
The city.
The people.

High heeled
lolly pops
sell their souls,
to machines with
none.

Breathing rag
lays stuffed
in the corner
of the alley.

Daring duos
zig zag through
speeding bullets.

I watch.
From the comfort
of my bed.

Astroprojection.

A contest entry

I astro project, at will, at times. Or at least, I think I do! :)

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 11, 2007
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    Good

    good little poem, good luck!


  • Shahrazad
    September 3, 2007

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    I liked the sort of cryptic imagery in this that kept me guessing as to what they mean. Very original Thanks for entering in this contest!

    Also, just to clarify... were you refering to "astral projection": out of body experience? Or is astroprojection something else that I am unaware of?


    • islekine gold member
      September 5, 2007
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      Thanks...

      I looked up astroprojection and astral
      projection....you tell me the difference....
      Mahalo!
      *PEACE*