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Heather's Dream

When I close my eyes at night,
it removes my sight,
I cannot see the stars or moon,
but I'll be in my own world soon,
Where Im the queen of all I see,
and all the puppy dogs roam free,
The kitty cats are dancing there,
with elephants and baby bears,
Around they twirl, by my chair,
as they eat up all my pears,
When I wake, in the morning,
I'll be in my room,
I won't remember all my friends,
but I will see them soon.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Thank you for your cute entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • celticbeauty
    November 18, 2007

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    we wrote this when I was in the fifth gade !!!!!!!!!!!! Do you remember? I will always. murnt. I love u daddy
    xoxo moocow


  • ellipsist
    September 4, 2007

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    thank you for this entry... I really

    enjoy the kind of random rhymes...

    I thank you for your participation in this contest and for sharing this wonderfully creative piece...