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Ain't too proud to beg!

WARNING:   This is a hardcore poem written soley for the contest, if you do not like hardcore, then please do not read any further.

thanks!


Come and eat from my tasty plate
I prepared it just for you
I beg you please I can't wait
We are alone at last us two

I have some orderves for you to try

Just for starters the nibbles await

I have delicacy's of raw food, seeds and nuts

I beg you to munch through my plate

 

The eye doesn't grieve what it can't see

But I'll bet you know what's in store

You need no imagination to guess what I feel

As I hear you begging for more

 

I now display cherries for you to see

Flowing from my buxom breasts

Come hither and taste me lend me your tongue

As I guide you to meet my guests

 

You're getting very friendly with your new found friends

As I enjoy borrowing your tongue

You slip around my neck and nibble my ears

Knowing you can never do wrong

 

I feel your cock against my thigh

I'm moist with pleasured pulsating lips

Your tongue teases the crotch of my leg

As I arch my back to raise my hips

 

My body's so sensitive filled with fire

I guide your manhood into my gaze

Taking you all the way as you thrust

Sending me into a nirvana daze

 

My orifice is creamed from your wealthy cup

I'm now begging you for more MORE

I need you to fuck me now the starters are done

Take me as I'm positioned all four

 

Your hands grip my waist as you guide yourself in

Into my soft and sensual abode

I'm oh so warm and throbbing with pleasure

Waiting for you to shoot your load

 

You fuck me hard as I ride your cock

I can feel I'm about to cum

The sensations are higher as I find my heaven

Reaching the peak 'til I'm numb

 

You roll me over to taste where you've been

Tantalizing your tongue with my juice

Slowly you tease me finding every nook and cranny

Telling me you'll never cut loose

 

There's just one more thing you'd like to do

As I'm at your mercy and filled with desire

Lay there caressing my body as you observe

My tongue licking you 'til you cum and you fire!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I've not written anything like this before (publicly)... Thought I'd give it a bash! Pardon the pun lol! Enjoy

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    dear poet if this is first time out, then step up to bat and write more, for this is hot and well worth the reading and fanning on my part.

    Riftkin.


  • Swtpoetryman
    September 4, 2007
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    Perhaps I'll write you one for your Birthday, Baby!

    Thanks SO MUCH for submitting to my contest! I enjoyed this last minute entry VERY MUCH, indeed - and i hope to see more pieces like this one from you - in the other contest that i'll be running whenever that may be!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    Here cum three horny fellows who think that you do a stand-up job (pun intended) on this one!


    • Justinez
      September 4, 2007
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      THANKS XXX

      Thank you so much for the HM... Hope you enjoyed your Birthday - I guess I don't need to hope, I'm sure you did!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 4, 2007

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    For your first public 'outing' so to speak, this is pretty bloody good.

    All the best in the contest...Sue