lying on top of the covers
clad in skin and raw emotion
my every outline traced
first by pools of blue green
[never look away?]
and by fingertips so gentle.
{.i love you.}
Slow motion breath
and mindless loss of self.
{.i love you too.}
Author notes
Option Three. (i'm glad you inspired me to write this down, beluga.)
pine trees on a mountaintop [[option two]]
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Comments
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In the authors notes write pine trees on a mountaintop and what option number
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this is beautiful. very sensual and full of great imagery. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Simple and incredibly sweet I like the punctuation- it adds style just a little bit more.
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awww that is cute. thanks for entering in my contest.
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Aww, I can tell this is a reason to love. Such sweet emotion you've penned here. I love love poems, lol. Good write and good luck.
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Thank you for entering my contest. You say so much in ten lines yet leave so much more unsaid. Very nice.
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awww this is sweet, im glad i inspired you too youve described the moment really poetically and tenderly. thanks heaps for entering!
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