Forced into another world
Where she can't be different
Confused and all alone in this crazy place
A place where original is bad
Being yourself is insane
And not being popular is suicide
But she fights this system
Lets her thoughts be heard
And her style reconigzed
Getting pushed down time and time again
Not giving up until people look
She knows they will
And when they do something changes
A contest entry
- :: Picture Inspiration :: 3 Days ONLY by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended September 8, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 10 options for the creative poet (2) by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended November 9, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nicely written, it is good to be yourself, none can do it better than you can.
Best of luck to you...Scott
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it's so hard to be your own individual sometimes! but i think it's worth it
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In the long run, it's always worth it to be true to yourself.
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I loved this. You have an amazing style and This read like a poem for me. I was an outcast in highschool so this feels very personel. You have a gift
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Your thinking seems still unlimited in options and reclaiming others. Very original in writing. Feels your poem like to continue to learn and to unlearn. A beautiful free spirit as well.
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So sad THEY DONT KNOW
Yes in the world as it is today young people dont know what to be or not to be for through the years the parents havent paid any atention to the changes about them and in doing so they have no idea what its like in the school systems anymore .
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Interesting take on the prompt chosen. Well thought lines of inadequacy penned here. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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dontworry.you arent the only one fighting.
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