Whenever we're together,
I can do anything.
When I'm in your arms,
I can face the world.
When you look at me,
a thousand stars twinkle in your eyes.
When I say your name,
my heart soars.
When I see your face,
I think of our future together.
When I hold you,
nothing can go wrong.
When we're apart,
nothing seems right,
When we kiss,
nothing else exists.
When I fall,
you help me up.
When you're sad,
I'll be there to brighten your day.
All this....
in a thought.
Author notes
*parrot*
A contest entry
- Stop my sun setting(quickie)will judge with the setting of the sun new Zealand time. by Kindredblood.
1000 points, ended September 4, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - my first anything you want just make it good by Joy.To.The.World.
420 points, ended September 6, 2007, 10 entries
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I love you!!! How can I say it enough??? I love you!!! I love you!!! I love you!!!
Please keep on writing; you're amazing!!!
Always,
Cassie
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Pretty
This is very nice. Very romantic. Keep up the awesome work.
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i like the love put into the poem nice job thank you for entering
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reading this poem, made me feel the emotions pouring very deep, makes life worth living, amazing how love can be woven into the magic of life, Beautifully woven poem, and thank you for entering my contest, Good luck
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Thanks!!!
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Awww! This is very sweet. It makes me want to puke. jk! Very nicely done, and I like the last line. Keep up the great work!
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