*This song is a parody of High School Musical's "Breaking Free". In order to get an idea of the tune to this, I recommend playing the song at the same time you are reading this poem.*
He's snoring
I'm trying
To get some sleep
But I can't with him right there
His loud noises
Fill the nighttime air
You know we all can hear him
Every night when we're laying in our beds
It's harder on those near him
Just like the rumors said
Obviously he's never heard
Of Breathe-Right Strips
He's snoring
I'm trying
To get some sleep
But I can't with him right there
His loud noises
Fill the nighttime air
Can you hear it building
Like a wave the ocean just can't control
It shakes the walls and ceilings
And rattles my very bones
Rising till it drives
And shakes the house to chips
He's snoring
I'm trying
To get some sleep
But I can't with him right there
His loud noises
Fill the nighttime air
We're running
Climbing
To get to that place
Where we all can have some peace
Maybe duct tape
Will shut up his face
More than hope, more than faith
It's the truth, there's no way
That we'll ever avoid it coming
More than you, more than me
Not a want, but a need
All of us must break free
From the snoring
'Cause I'm trying
To get some sleep
But I can't with him right there
His loud noises
Fill the nighttime air
We're running
Climbing
To get to that place
Where we all can have some peace
Maybe duct tape
Will shut up his face
You know we all can hear him
Every night when we're laying in our beds...
Author notes
Another boredom inspired piece. Kinda based on my dad, because he snores to wake the dead.
Originally I was going to change this and make it into a Kingdom Hearts fanfiction. (Kingdom Hearts is an AWESOME video game.)
If you like High School Musical, please don't be offended by this. I like High School Musical, almost to the point of obsession.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, now this made me chuckle and I really needed a chuckle! I love High School Musical, and to see this in front of my eyes, was superb. I can also agree with you that Kingdom Hearts is an excellent game! I hope to be reading more of your writings, and keep up the good work!
All the best,
~Stephi-Dawne~
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I love HSM! But this song is way better than "Breaking Free" LOL It's amazing I love it! It's Hysterically funny XD I cracked up reading this... Brava, Poettess, Brava! LMAO!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
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oh but boredom creates thr greatest poets!!! this is hilariously fuinny!!!
GBY
SilverButterfly -
That was great! I loved it, and i know the feeling, i swear my brother snores louder than a chainsaw, it really made me laugh inside. Fantastic job.
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That is hysterical!! My brother snores the same way My sister loves High School Musical but I can't stand it
Nevertheless, I know the song, and this is funny
Midnight -
hilarious
i really giggled out loud..... i love the film too (dont tell anyone hehe) but i couldnt help but laugh as my dad also snores like a mammal!
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awesome.
I loveee this poem.
Im not a fan at all, and this is HILARIOUS. -
great
i thought was so funny i liked that movie 2 -
Soo funny
I love this parody, and like you i can relate to this too, my dad also snores to wake the dead and we all hate it, and it is so hard to sleep while he is sleeping.
I really like
We're running
climbing
to get to that place
where we all can have some peace
maybe duct tape
will shut up his face
i love the use of the duct tape, as the place where i work pretty mu7ch uses duct tape to fix everything and i think fixing peoples snoring with duct tape is an extremely good and hilarious idea, i'm not much of a high school musical fan but if it had more funny songs like the one you just wrote i might come to like it a lot more, i really like this and i would love for you to write more parodies to High School Musical songs just so that i can laugh. btw im going to look up his kingdom hearts game so that i understand your coment, good luck in writing more of these -
HILLARIOUS!
I actually put the tune of t and sand this and I couldnt stop laughing lol
Lol you've got lots of talent for this kind of stuff,
wow,this was hillarious!>
great job here.
..Simply Me♥ -
LOL! This is so cute! I can really relate
to this one but, I am usually the one that snores!
It's really funny when I get up in the morning
and hear my entire family imitating the way that
I sounded last night. They're all frustrated and
grouchy as I just stretch and smile welcoming the
new day! LOL! Thanks a lot for sharing this one
here! Keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
OMG that hit home and was just too funny. I had to print this one and take it home to my boyfriend - he has to put up with my snoring and will love this - Wonderful humor and excellent job.
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Lol, I like it, but maybe it's just me, but I can't make the words fit when I sing it?
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Well, it takes a little creativity to get it right. I know what you mean.
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LoL This is awesome !! I absolutely love it ...
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this is very good... i enjoyed reading this piece a lot
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