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My Setting Sun

Today I have made a decision
On my arm I made an incision
Fate decreed it is time to begin
I ran the razor across my skin

I have made sure I have cut deep
It is time to make my heart sleep
Though it hurts…it must be done
Finished with the setting of the sun

My blood steadily begins to flow
Soon it is pouring no longer slow
In time to my heart a pulsing wave
Escaping my body no longer a slave

Run to the boards freedom is yours
As if listening faster my blood pours
Down my arm a river of final relief
To late to withdraw to late to grieve
As the sun sets I know it is now time
For my heart to stop writing this rhyme.

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Listening to enigma, strange when I listen to that I am normally relaxed, guess this time I am not, ever felt you were fighting a losing war? strange day Im having to day wonder what night will bring.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    Self Harm

    I feel the pain within this write
    Many Young People I have worked with over the years would understand this.
    I have seen it, and I have felt their inner pain and loss . Captures the image well


  • lostinthevoid
    September 3, 2007

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    wow

    this is gripping and I can only image this write as enigma is palying!what song from enigma?I luv to meditate to them. Good write !

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    I hear you. I feel your pain. Im here is you everyneed anything sometimes life is just to freaking much and you cant deal with it please know that im thinking of you love yeah.