lost and alone i sit in this room
about to do the most dramatic thing ive ever done
and i reach for the razor blade
a face pops into my mind
i begin to cry
as rage fills my heart
i begin to go numb
i slice once
fast and pricise
it takes no tyme at all before the blood starts to flow
my eyes fill will tears
and mascara stings my eyes
i grab a piece of paper and a pen and begin to write
"im sorry for what ive put you through
i know its better if i leave
so i lay my head down to sleep
in hopes that i shall not wake up
i love you all but i cant go on
goodbye"
so i do as the note say i slice one more time
on the vein
i cry in pain and agony
and fall into a deep painless sleep
Author notes
DEPRESSING WITH OPTIONS
option 2 and 3
A contest entry
- Depressing.... with options by Ntagatf.
500 points, ended September 19, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great job, I was going through this last nite, Slit my wrist a few times, kinda the same way you described it so great job and thanks for entering my contest and good luck!!!! Keep up the good work!
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You paint a perfect picture for the reader. This is some great work. I look forward to reading more.
"Fall into a deep painless sleep." I love it.
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yeah this is good there is lots of poetry like this out there i know you may be in pain and my heart is with you but that said this is an ok lil poem for what it is i can feel your emotion
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