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Evil Smile

Evil Smile,
Cease to be.
Shadows never,
Leave me be.
Learn anew,
Castle winds.
Fly upon,
Leather wings.
Devil grin,
Fall away.
The dragon deep,
I have to slay.
See the door,
Beyond the gates.
Open up,
Evil awaits.

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 21, 2007

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    WOW this is a great take for the contest
    I love the creepy vibe Well done best of luck to ya.


    delila


  • Ethereal One gold member
    September 6, 2007
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    Please put the option number that you chose in your author's comments.

    Thank you,


  • Scrunter
    September 6, 2007

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    I love the pace of this, it really had me realed in there from beginning to end. A fantastic write. Good luck in the contest.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 3, 2007

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    excellent~

    Really good and really quick as well...
    Please put what option you chose in the authors note...
    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest...
    I am hoping one of the options is here for this poem
    Susan~~~